Fix Your Sales Narrative in 10 Days — And Close More Deals 

 

 

I fix the story behind your sales, deck, and GTM.

30 years generating $25M ARR client books on Wall Street.
Now I help B2B FinTech founders sharpen their sales narrative.

It's not a sales problem.
It's a messaging problem.

Founders lose deals when the narrative is muddy, generic or buried in technical jargon.
If buyers don’t “get it” in the first 10 seconds:
  • The deck falls flat
  • Sales calls are weak
  • Prospects can’t repeat what you do
  • You sound like every other competitor
  • Deals stall
  • Fundraising drags
  • Your team tells 3 different versions of your value
This is a revenue problem masquerading as a messaging problem.

Rebuild your entire sales narrative in 7 days

  • Your positioning
  • Your first sentence
  • Your pitch
  • Your proof
  • Your offer
  • Your deck
  • Your outbound script
This isn’t copywriting.
It’s strategic sharpening.

 

Get a narrative that finally lands...and an effective way to present that value.

You bring the expertise.
I bring the clarity.

Built by a 30-year Wall Street sales leader.

 

Used by over 50 venture-backed & enterprise FinTech teams.

How It Works 

Day 1 — 45-min kickoff
  • what you say now
  • how buyers see you
  • where deals stall, etc.

Day 2 — I rebuild your narrative
  • Opening sentence
  • Pitch flow
  • Value narrative
  • Proof stack
  • Offer
  • Call script
  • Sales page outline
  • Deck structure
  • Outbound scripts

Day 5 — I tune & polish
  • Internal review
  • tighten phrasing
  • structure the story

Day 10 — Implementation Call
I walk you through:
  • “Here’s your new story.”
  • “Here’s how you present it.”
  • “Here’s the exact words to say.”
  • “Here’s how to use it on your next sales call.”

1 Week of Async Support

 

Pricing

$25,000 USD 

WHO THIS IS FOR

  • Founder-led B2B teams

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Next Steps

Book a Discussion Call

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